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Breath in My Bottle

  • Categories Poetry & Prose
  • Date May 16, 2011


 
 
 
 
 
 
Jarred by your breath–
by the water from your lips.
Your gravity shackles me,
orchestrating the swells
that thrash in my dreams.
Incomparable in soul.
Breaking me.
There is no divide of oceans,
and no separation of hand.
We belong mended–
a perfect mold in this life.
Wandering past poverty,
and breaking through storms.
I am a child inside your callings.
You bring me back to where I belong.
Magic forges our bottle.
Sealed by our unbreakable,
and loving bond.

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    28 Comments

  1. April
    May 16, 2011
    Reply

    Very beautiful….. =)) will miss you on here Jess, your work has been a true gift to my heart dear friend. I hope I will be back online soon enough…..XOXO! Love to you! April

    • Jessica
      May 16, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you love! I hope your hiatus is short and we still find a way to stay connected. Let me know how you are as soon as you can. Much love. xoxoxo

  2. Bradley Howington
    May 16, 2011
    Reply

    Lovely poem, Jessica! I really enjoyed this piece. You write so beautifully. 🙂

    • Jessica
      May 16, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Brad! I appreciate your sweet compliment and for stopping by. xo 🙂

  3. Kristina Farrow
    May 17, 2011
    Reply

    So well written; I love your poetry.

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Kristina 🙂

  4. brian
    May 17, 2011
    Reply

    a bottle is a great metaphor for a relationship and all that it can contain…and as long as it is together it can hold much…nice..

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Brian!

  5. Anthony Desmond
    May 17, 2011
    Reply

    this so beautiful.. love as a bottle holding so much inside. great poem!

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Anthony, I appreciate you reading. 🙂

  6. Henry Clemmons
    May 17, 2011
    Reply

    Tonight is a great night for poetry. A level above excellence.

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you so much Henry.

  7. ayala
    May 17, 2011
    Reply

    Lovely!

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you!

  8. john @bookdreamer
    May 17, 2011
    Reply

    Lovely use imagery

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you John, I appreciate it. 🙂

  9. Mindlovemisery
    May 18, 2011
    Reply

    Breath-taking! I aspire to write so masterfully. Wonderful job =)

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Aw, thank you! What a lovely compliment. It is much appreciated.

  10. pete marshall
    May 18, 2011
    Reply

    wonderful piece…but then your work always is…cheers pete

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Pete, you are sweet. 🙂

  11. Louise
    May 18, 2011
    Reply

    beautiful piece…lovely as always..

    • Jessica
      May 18, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Louise! XO

  12. fred
    May 18, 2011
    Reply

    Love the flow in such a small space. The layered depth in here is difficult to convey for a piece three times it’s length, yet what a wonderful job you did here, again in such a small place. Concise with out imagery sacrifice. Thanks for sharing

    • Jessica
      May 19, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you! I am honored you enjoyed it. 🙂

  13. C Rose
    May 19, 2011
    Reply

    A great intensity expressed here, I found it quite touching
    “Wandering past poverty,
    and breaking through storms.
    I am a child inside your callings.
    You bring me back to where I belong.”
    Absolutely got me with that stanza, beautiful! ~ Rose

    • Jessica
      May 19, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you Rose. I love that you came by and I really appreciate your comment. 🙂

  14. swan rose
    May 25, 2011
    Reply

    I like all of this but love this part
    Your gravity shackles me,
    orchestrating the swells
    that thrash in my dreams
    Very very nice work…

    • Jessica
      May 25, 2011
      Reply

      Thank you very much. xoxoo 🙂

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