Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. 🙂
great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece…
Thank you Brian, it is great to see you 🙂 I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there.
well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib
Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful.
Thank you Ayala 🙂
Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit
Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. 😉
Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style.
Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. 🙂
great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece…
Thank you Brian, it is great to see you 🙂 I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there.
well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib
Thanks Lib! xoxo
Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it.
Thank you very much. xoxo
Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantástico! ?? 🙂
And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/
I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them 🙁
Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo
An enchanting poem…wonderful.
Thank you sweet David 🙂
A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read.
Thank you! xoxo
He was lost as I was broken… love that.
Really enjoyed this piece, thanks.
I appreciate you reading Vanessa 🙂
Very pretty!
Thanks for the follow on Twitter!