Mermaid’s Tail
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Tag:Author, captain, friendship, honor, hope, jessica kristie, journal, love, mermaid's tail, poems, poetry, sea, ships, water, write
23 Comments
Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful.
Thank you Ayala 🙂
Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit
Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. 😉
Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style.
Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. 🙂
great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece…
Thank you Brian, it is great to see you 🙂 I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there.
well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib
Thanks Lib! xoxo
Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it.
Thank you very much. xoxo
Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantástico! ?? 🙂
And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/
I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them 🙁
Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo
An enchanting poem…wonderful.
Thank you sweet David 🙂
A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read.
Thank you! xoxo
He was lost as I was broken… love that.
Really enjoyed this piece, thanks.
I appreciate you reading Vanessa 🙂
Very pretty!
Thanks for the follow on Twitter!