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Mermaid’s Tail

  • Categories Poetry & Prose
  • Date April 29, 2012
Mermaid’s Tail

 

 

Tag:Author, captain, friendship, honor, hope, jessica kristie, journal, love, mermaid's tail, poems, poetry, sea, ships, water, write

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    23 Comments

  1. ayala
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful.

    • Jessica
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      Thank you Ayala ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Natasha
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit

    • Jessica
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. Anna Montgomery
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style.

    • Jessica
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. brian miller
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece…

    • Jessica
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      Thank you Brian, it is great to see you ๐Ÿ™‚ I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there.

  5. libithina
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib

    • Jessica
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      Thanks Lib! xoxo

  6. hedgewitch
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it.

    • Jessica
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      Thank you very much. xoxo

  7. Bradley Howington
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantรกstico! ?? ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Bradley Howington
      June 12, 2012
      Reply

      And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/

      • Jessica
        June 12, 2012
        Reply

        I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them ๐Ÿ™

        Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo

  8. David (1MereMortal)
    June 12, 2012
    Reply

    An enchanting poem…wonderful.

    • Jessica
      June 15, 2012
      Reply

      Thank you sweet David ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Marbles in My Pocket
    June 13, 2012
    Reply

    A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read.

    • Jessica
      June 15, 2012
      Reply

      Thank you! xoxo

  10. Vanessa Matthews
    June 13, 2012
    Reply

    He was lost as I was broken… love that.
    Really enjoyed this piece, thanks.

    • Jessica
      June 15, 2012
      Reply

      I appreciate you reading Vanessa ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. John Collins
    June 18, 2012
    Reply

    Very pretty!

    Thanks for the follow on Twitter!

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