Prose Poetry Mermaid’s Tail April 29, 2012 23 Comments Previous Post Next Post Jessica In this area you can display your biographic info. Just visit Users > Your Profile > Biographic info You may also like March 19, 2012 Feature – Natasha Head September 21, 2011 Words Lost January 7, 2014 Opening the Blessings 23 comments Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful. Reply Thank you Ayala 🙂 Reply Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit Reply Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. 😉 Reply Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style. Reply Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. 🙂 Reply great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece… Reply Thank you Brian, it is great to see you 🙂 I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there. Reply well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib Reply Thanks Lib! xoxo Reply Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it. Reply Thank you very much. xoxo Reply Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantástico! ?? 🙂 Reply And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/ Reply I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them 🙁 Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo Reply An enchanting poem…wonderful. Reply Thank you sweet David 🙂 Reply A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read. Reply Thank you! xoxo Reply He was lost as I was broken… love that. Really enjoyed this piece, thanks. Reply I appreciate you reading Vanessa 🙂 Reply Very pretty! Thanks for the follow on Twitter! Reply Pingback: Mermaid’s Tail | JessicaKristie.com « thebleedingpen Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website Please enter an answer in digits:2 × 1 = Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email.