Prose Poetry Mermaid’s Tail April 29, 2012 23 Comments Previous Post Next Post Jessica In this area you can display your biographic info. Just visit Users > Your Profile > Biographic info You may also like July 20, 2011 Standing Tall in Pieces May 1, 2012 Weekly Inspirations for Writers & Creators August 1, 2016 Angel Pieces 23 comments Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful. Reply Thank you Ayala 🙂 Reply Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit Reply Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. 😉 Reply Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style. Reply Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. 🙂 Reply great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece… Reply Thank you Brian, it is great to see you 🙂 I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there. Reply well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib Reply Thanks Lib! xoxo Reply Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it. Reply Thank you very much. xoxo Reply Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantástico! ?? 🙂 Reply And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/ Reply I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them 🙁 Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo Reply An enchanting poem…wonderful. Reply Thank you sweet David 🙂 Reply A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read. Reply Thank you! xoxo Reply He was lost as I was broken… love that. Really enjoyed this piece, thanks. Reply I appreciate you reading Vanessa 🙂 Reply Very pretty! Thanks for the follow on Twitter! Reply Pingback: Mermaid’s Tail | JessicaKristie.com « thebleedingpen Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website Please enter an answer in digits:nine − 7 = Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email.