Mermaid’s Tail Posted on April 29, 2012 This post has 23 comments Share:TwitterFacebookGooglePinterestStumbleUponRedditLinkedInEmail 23 comments Leave a comment Share on Facebook Post on Twitter Tags:Author captain friendship honor hope jessica kristie journal love mermaid's tail poems poetry sea ships water write Leave a Reply Cancel reply 23 comments ayala on June 12, 2012 12:20 pm Reply Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful. Jessica on June 12, 2012 12:41 pm Reply Thank you Ayala Pingback: Mermaid’s Tail | JessicaKristie.com « thebleedingpen Natasha on June 12, 2012 12:32 pm Reply Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit Jessica on June 12, 2012 12:43 pm Reply Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. Anna Montgomery on June 12, 2012 12:49 pm Reply Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style. Jessica on June 12, 2012 12:52 pm Reply Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. brian miller on June 12, 2012 1:02 pm Reply great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece… Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:03 pm Reply Thank you Brian, it is great to see you I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there. libithina on June 12, 2012 2:31 pm Reply well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:03 pm Reply Thanks Lib! xoxo hedgewitch on June 12, 2012 5:31 pm Reply Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it. Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:04 pm Reply Thank you very much. xoxo Bradley Howington on June 12, 2012 9:26 pm Reply Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantástico! ?? Bradley Howington on June 12, 2012 9:28 pm Reply And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/ Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:04 pm Reply I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo David (1MereMortal) on June 12, 2012 11:18 pm Reply An enchanting poem…wonderful. Jessica on June 15, 2012 9:16 pm Reply Thank you sweet David Marbles in My Pocket on June 13, 2012 2:19 pm Reply A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read. Jessica on June 15, 2012 9:16 pm Reply Thank you! xoxo Vanessa Matthews on June 13, 2012 3:47 pm Reply He was lost as I was broken… love that. Really enjoyed this piece, thanks. Jessica on June 15, 2012 9:17 pm Reply I appreciate you reading Vanessa John Collins on June 18, 2012 1:18 pm Reply Very pretty! Thanks for the follow on Twitter!