Jessica Kristie

Mermaid’s Tail

 

 

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23 comments

ayala on June 12, 2012 12:20 pm Reply

Love this…great lines here…a river to make peace upon…his eyes twirled like windmills….passionate and beautiful.

Jessica on June 12, 2012 12:41 pm Reply

Thank you Ayala :)

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Natasha on June 12, 2012 12:32 pm Reply

Jess…I LOVE this, the presentation, the language, the myth…a personal favorite that was nice to revisit

Jessica on June 12, 2012 12:43 pm Reply

Thank you my dear. I have a thing for pirates and mermaids…. ssshhh, don’t tell anyone. ;)

Anna Montgomery on June 12, 2012 12:49 pm Reply

Evocative and intriguing. So you know, my post tonight is not my usual style.

Jessica on June 12, 2012 12:52 pm Reply

Anna, I loved your post. The fact you can be in the moment and learn the lessons for everything in your life is so important. I enjoyed what you shared and feel it was very touching. :)

brian miller on June 12, 2012 1:02 pm Reply

great use of words jess…the opening had me wondering if this was going to a darker place…even with teh use of perpetrator later in the piece you still have me wondering…but i think it turns out good, him seeing in you what you can not and in the end wooing you…nice piece…

Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:03 pm Reply

Thank you Brian, it is great to see you :) I love your interpretation and my intention was not to be completely dark although I always seem to go there.

libithina on June 12, 2012 2:31 pm Reply

well Jess the mermaids would have me everytime – love the myth and magic of the siren – and a real captivation here – held – ‘wrapped tight’ as his ‘eyes twirled with windmills in the moonlight’ fabulous image – lib

Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:03 pm Reply

Thanks Lib! xoxo

hedgewitch on June 12, 2012 5:31 pm Reply

Silvery and luminous as moonlight, liquid as the trickle of a stream through a dark woods. Enjoyed it.

Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:04 pm Reply

Thank you very much. xoxo

Bradley Howington on June 12, 2012 9:26 pm Reply

Oh sweet Jessica, this was a magnificent write. I was hooked, and read it aloud – fantástico! ?? :)

Bradley Howington on June 12, 2012 9:28 pm Reply

And I placed two hearts at the end, but they show as question marks. Lol. :/

Jessica on June 12, 2012 11:04 pm Reply

I hate that WP does that. Why can’t we post hearts & rainbows? I feel lost without them :(

Thanks for stopping love, so glad you liked it. xoxo

David (1MereMortal) on June 12, 2012 11:18 pm Reply

An enchanting poem…wonderful.

Jessica on June 15, 2012 9:16 pm Reply

Thank you sweet David :)

Marbles in My Pocket on June 13, 2012 2:19 pm Reply

A beautiful romantic poem, Jessica! Very enjoyable read.

Jessica on June 15, 2012 9:16 pm Reply

Thank you! xoxo

Vanessa Matthews on June 13, 2012 3:47 pm Reply

He was lost as I was broken… love that.
Really enjoyed this piece, thanks.

Jessica on June 15, 2012 9:17 pm Reply

I appreciate you reading Vanessa :)

John Collins on June 18, 2012 1:18 pm Reply

Very pretty!

Thanks for the follow on Twitter!